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Fish bitch

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idfk
yeah
this is so messy >:'I
welp
i aint gonna fix it
meenah> hussie
art> mwah

critiques
if you are going to critique,
be serious and dont just say good things (saying things like you would in the comments section) ,
i want honest opinions.
if you dont want to critique, just comment or favorite instead
UuU thanks!
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Ill first explain why I rated the way I did in order
Vision: You pose this character really well. Her expression and movement almost give her a mischievous vibe. She seems alive and animated which is hard to capture for some. Good sense of motion overall.
Originality: obvious reasons
Technique: Colored line weight is rarely used it adds a nice touch my only critique with the lines is to vary the line weight in a more obvious fashion, I like to use increased line weight where two line intersect or where an object overlaps another. Shifting this line weight will add more movement to the drawing. This is a subtlety but should be kept in mind. The only true error I find is in the fold of her left leg (her left not ours behind her leg) you indicated a fold as if the leg was bending which it isn't. Your strong point is definitely in your coloring and shading. The highlights look great but their positions are where light does not hit directly (i'm thinking your light source is above). The fingers could use some work.

Pro's
Pose is epic
Movement is great
Shading is appealing (except where teh trident overlaps her bracelet because they blend together. If this happens you darken one of the two)
Expression expresses

Con's
Fingers, fold at knee, shoes, are incorrect. (the fingers hurt you the most here)
No back drop for the character (she is floating in space)
No intentional line variation (as i see it)
Questionable highlights (at arms) <--- thats my nit picky thing it may not be a flaw

Impact: Looks good overall, looks very energetic ^^. All in all this was a success a few things here and there would take it to the next level.