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I'm getting spider bites today
i cant
fucking
wait
omg
<33333
c:
EDIT
i added a little more to it, it makes it look nicer c:
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Vision: You used very strong colors like usual which is effective. The green background against her head really brings out her hair and cheeks. My only true critique here is that the scarf and shirt seem to be the same value, darkening or brightening one of the two would result a better communicated distance between her body and the scarf. This is a small critique though

Originality: You get points here cuz of your style and the fact that you arnt mimicking characters. If this was a character that u created (not yourself) I woulda given you a 5. (again this doesn't really matter as long as you arnt copying peoples work)

Technique: Your use of textures does extremely well here as you used them to shade. additionally i like how the hair changes color as look passed the bangs it really helps your sense of depth. As said before the background and color scheme are effective. Also I believe I am seeing some line weight around the legs! keep practicing that

Impact: You actually surprised me with this one, it seems really interest with the facial expression and color contrast that makes us focus more on the facial expression. Due to this you communicate such mood in the piece.

Last thoughts: Overall good work